Dang, your name is familiar...and not because of the Krystal part. Do I know you from a message board? Maybe we watched each other while I was on my old account, ~Aldran? Regardless, impressive artwork here, sir. b^-^d
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actually I am practicing right now and I have gotten better though but I don't upload much stuff here since my latest work is adult rated and I haven't got round to alterting some images to mature rated yet.
honestly I can do a good picture if I can come up with a background etc that is some of my images have come out good but the best one I've done this year that isn't adult rated is my Picture of Boma from heatguy J I think he was well done in the picture apart from the fact the image texture is a bit sharp in some places.
Your characters here in your DA gallery are quite unique, but I'm also going to have to agree with
Getting the right proportions for bodies and such in a drawing is one of the hardest things to do and it's one of the things that I find you need to work on a bit more. On another note, I noticed that you seem to be sticking with a constant medium... which is marker, or pastels I'm guessing? I'm not quite sure, not all of your descriptions say what the medium is. However, the coloring job is a little on the messy side when it comes to slightly reach the outside of the lines.
Other then those critiques I have for you, your art is very good and it will keep getting better. I hope my point of view will help you do better in the future.
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"I loved you piggy!!! I LOVED YOOOOOOOU!!!" - GIR
~A good friend will bail ya out of jail, but a GREAT friend will be sitting there next to you saying, "Damn that was fun!!"~
Your DAs are pretty good, although I do have some more pointers. Although your deviations would say Advanced Critique Encouraged, because most people on deviant art are too-nice suck ups will tell you exactly what you want to hear, it's hard to tell what's the tips and what's just someone kissing up to your ass.
You should work on your anatomy. Alot of times the legs are too short, the arts are uneven and the body's figure just.. isn't.. right. Now I'm not one to be telling you pointers, because I don't have a scanner and all I can submit is my crappy computer art.
Just keep practicing, don't ever stop trying to learn anatomy or drawing techniques because no one's art is EVER perfect, or close to it. I see alot of potential in you, if you keep practicing you'll become a great artist. :3
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That was too close! You were almost a JILL SANDWHICH!
Cool dude, keep up the work, improve, observe, practice, take criticism, don't get too cocky, backtrack and gather reference and experience and don't linger and stay at one spot when you think you're settled with an art style, keep on the move.
Those are my words, take them to heart and you'll succeed, I too, am on a long way to becoming a professional, it's my dream, my passion, my goal. Don't fuck it up for yourself, friend.
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Why deviously deny me if we all know I won't be commenting on your pieceofshit page anyway?
On my way to the glory of victory! Or a glorious death...
Umm Isn't this KND club? I've left all the clubs and took em all off my journals since it took so long to load up my page also at that time I bandonded DA to but I'm still not with any more clubs from now on.
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honestly I can do a good picture if I can come up with a background etc that is some of my images have come out good but the best one I've done this year that isn't adult rated is my Picture of Boma from heatguy J I think he was well done in the picture apart from the fact the image texture is a bit sharp in some places.
Many Thanks for the tip
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btw I mostly use Ulead photo express.
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Getting the right proportions for bodies and such in a drawing is one of the hardest things to do and it's one of the things that I find you need to work on a bit more. On another note, I noticed that you seem to be sticking with a constant medium... which is marker, or pastels I'm guessing? I'm not quite sure, not all of your descriptions say what the medium is. However, the coloring job is a little on the messy side when it comes to slightly reach the outside of the lines.
Other then those critiques I have for you, your art is very good and it will keep getting better. I hope my point of view will help you do better in the future.
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"I loved you piggy!!! I LOVED YOOOOOOOU!!!" - GIR
~A good friend will bail ya out of jail, but a GREAT friend will be sitting there next to you saying, "Damn that was fun!!"~
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That was too close! You were almost a JILL SANDWHICH!
Your DAs are pretty good, although I do have some more pointers. Although your deviations would say Advanced Critique Encouraged, because most people on deviant art are too-nice suck ups will tell you exactly what you want to hear, it's hard to tell what's the tips and what's just someone kissing up to your ass.
You should work on your anatomy. Alot of times the legs are too short, the arts are uneven and the body's figure just.. isn't.. right. Now I'm not one to be telling you pointers, because I don't have a scanner and all I can submit is my crappy computer art.
Just keep practicing, don't ever stop trying to learn anatomy or drawing techniques because no one's art is EVER perfect, or close to it. I see alot of potential in you, if you keep practicing you'll become a great artist. :3
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That was too close! You were almost a JILL SANDWHICH!
Those are my words, take them to heart and you'll succeed, I too, am on a long way to becoming a professional, it's my dream, my passion, my goal. Don't fuck it up for yourself, friend.
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Why deviously deny me if we all know I won't be commenting on your pieceofshit page anyway?
On my way to the glory of victory! Or a glorious death...
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Technology. Making better, better. Onwards, upwards - any way, but backwards. Tapping Progress on the shoulder and saying "More Forwards please!"
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Smelly Monkey!!!
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